4 thoughts on “goodnight”

1. 

   reader poll: are the final two lines cheesy?

2. 

   love the poem. last two lines, they’re pretty heavy. Is that what you want?

3. 

   I’d say they’re a pretty solid pair, but in the same vein, “overtake every last one of us” is powerful by itself, too. Mmm, the tribulations of poetry.

4. 

   i always worry about cheesiness also and find myself laughing uncontrollably at it. I didn’t laugh uncontrollably (or at all) at this, so by that infallible measuring method, I would say not cheesy.