Now her feet are green
From all the running around
Without wearing shoes
.
I’d wash those feet off
But won’t wipe away her smile
If I can help it.
Now her feet are green
From all the running around
Without wearing shoes
.
I’d wash those feet off
But won’t wipe away her smile
If I can help it.
You messed up on the haiku aspect in the middle line of the second stanza.