daughters at play

poetry

Now her feet are green

From all the running around

Without wearing shoes

I’d wash those feet off

But won’t wipe away her smile

If I can help it.

One thought on “daughters at play”

youngjeeter

May 27, 2008 at 5:46 pm Reply

You messed up on the haiku aspect in the middle line of the second stanza.

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