gaudy curves that seemed filled
with sugar
perfect like the rolling hills
of tennessee, only pleasantly
excessive
lawless dark brown hair
matching her face
with metal pertruding
through her lower-left lip
she was lost, her figure
filling out a mold made
from fantasties grown stale
and muddied by years
of dissilusionment
and cold
and in the middle of
directing her to muskegon,
after my eyes had travelled the
breadth of her voluptious
body, i told her about it
i told her about her beauty,
i said “you’re gorgeous…
by the way”
and she paused
smiling
with one foot out the door
and didn’t say thanks
she left me for muskegon
with something hidden
inside of a smile and
a pause
perfect like a picture
“lawless dark brown hair” Yes. Vivid. The whole thing’s good too.
Just dreamy. Great work. It captivated me.
I loved the ending in particular.