water from a hose
hot before cool and passed
brother to brother—
the break worthwhile
untainted by man
like bottled water will be
and much much purer—
for guzzles earned
when I-25
reached one end to the other
my house to Grandpa’s—
places for play
water from a hose
hot before cool and passed
brother to brother—
the break worthwhile
untainted by man
like bottled water will be
and much much purer—
for guzzles earned
when I-25
reached one end to the other
my house to Grandpa’s—
places for play
this first stanza…. awesome
haven’t heard anything from you for a while, what have you been doing, perfecting this poem?
?!?!?!?!?TIM REALLY IS A SLACKER ISN’T HE?!?!?!?!