sit many,
silent spread out and waiting
to be taken the same place but not together.
hoping their train will soon arrive.
as children they’d sat near to mother afraid and close
holding her hand, small and wondering
not knowing where they were going.
some things never change
now, not brave, but bigger at least and used to being alone
or maybe just resigned.
hoping their train will soon arrive to take them away
on the train now, they all sit apart together, looking away
out the window, avoiding eye contact with all the other someones
outside a sign:
“Use caution when exiting the train.”
and then:
“Please be mindful of children. Please take them by the hand.”
Sound advice
as if hearing the pleas of the silent passing eyes.
Hey there. I like your style of writing. It has like a contemplative feel, maybe slightly melancholic, I dunno something that appeals to me. All i know is that I like this piece and the others too.