13 thoughts on “Serenity”

1. 

   somehow this sounds inappropriate… i’m not sure its supposed to… it could just be a patch of grass.

2. 

   p.s. thanks for breaking them up

3. 

   yeah, is your “most serene spot” a euphemism?

4. 

   This poem is not at all ment to be taken in an inappropriate way.

5. 

   all i’m saying is in this postmodern world, it means to me whatever i think it means…

   and, it seems to me….

6. 

   like what?

7. 

   ah we’re jus’ playin’.

8. 

   its true.. we tend to play a bit.

9. 

   perverts all of ya, probably having lewd thoughts from a poem. I, on the other hand, thought it was about a person in the shower talking to his brush and saying how it never reaches a relaxing spot on his back.

10. 

    bath brush that is. I’m being careful around your overworking minds to avoid any confusion (:

11. 

    It’s about finding peace in nature!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    It’s from the perspective of the actual woods!!!!!!!!!

12. 

    woah… what do you mean by nature? actual woods?
    this has gone downhill really fast..

13. 

    Downhill?