did you guys know that pretty words arranged in neatly spaced lines doesn’t make poetry? i heard that. apparently its true.

poetry

bluffage brought roughage
to the cliff ridge

we held hands
and jumped

4 thoughts on “did you guys know that pretty words arranged in neatly spaced lines doesn’t make poetry? i heard that. apparently its true.

  1. beighartman's avatar

    Your last three have all been winners. I just hate commenting when I’ve been too busy/lazy (but mostly lazy) to be posting anything of my own. It doesn’t feel right. Ok then.

    Top notch material though. Keep up the good work.

    1. freakynewchild's avatar

      I kind of echo the same sentiment except that I am not particularly busy or lazy to post anything. The idea of writing poetry, or at least attempting it feels like death at the moment.

      This time of the year is always dramatic for me, I am a sentimentalist of the worst kind. Besides, this year has been has the worst year ever. So I will be absent for a little while, until then happy holidays to all of you ! As for me, I’m off to slay, bury and mourn all this year’s terrible days so that I can leave them behind…

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