Try writing the word
Loneliness
When you’re really
Truly
Alone.
The letters stretch like
Highways
In a city that isn’t
Your
Own.
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the sieve and the sand 
Great work again, although now I’m feeling sad.
Heavy. Reminiscent of the EE Cummings poem “l(a le” or something like that, I think it’s untitled, but that’s not the point. Point is, this is poignant, memorable, and really good.
It is a long word.
wonderful
great imagery
quick as loneliness never is ..
strong as it always
who is this person we added to the sieve writing such good poetry she makes us look bad?
excellent decision on our part.
David, i agree. The word is too long. The world needs a Shakespeare part II to shorten it for us.
beautiful.