I watched you fall
from the top of the world
to the bottom of the barrel
I heard the wet thud
as you struck the wooden floor
your body splayed out
and there you lay
Then blood started pooling
at the bass of your haired cranium
your fingers curled forevermore
and there you lay
I watched you fall
from the top of the world
to the bottom of the barrel
and I didn’t try to catch you
the sieve and the sand 
i really enjoyed this, if enjoyment is the right word for contemplating another’s demise. Yeah, I enjoyed it.
We must be terrible, you and I.
great minds think alike, i suppose. just read this after i posted “little exercise” and i thought to myself, “what the hell is wrong with us?”
dude we rock.
And suck.
Hell yeah.
Was thinking it, but didn’t want to say it.
Fair.