my condition shows itself not
lest the axis of the earth should be
slightly altered to the left
for then the
moon might shine through these
trees at night and illuminate
my once pale thoughts
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the sieve and the sand 
Other than stumbling over the title a few times, I really like this. And also, I think I finally nailed the pronunciation, so that’s good too.
yea this felt like a struggle for a suitable title… but thanks on the poem eh.
the poem ALWAYS comes before the title for me.
though sometimes i use the variable length of the title to see what other poetry i can squeeze in
And I’m always a joyful recipient of those extended titles, haha.