at night we count
not stars but gunshots–
five two days ago.
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the sieve and the sand 
wow!
yeah! Wow!
i love the poem, but what does
“five two days” mean?
interesting to see – thanks
five gun shots
two days ago
and a good postmodern:
whatever you think it means
good one
I’ll keep that on mind