is NOT the space between two points/
distance/is a tearing sensation/
rending hearts and continents apart/
leaving us to say goodbye/like we mean it/
far too frequently
it
is
a
dropping
sensation.
the
falling
feeling
when something old&expensive hits the floor/
when your foot forgets the ground/and is surprised/
by the next step
i LOVE the last two lines of this.
that’s good to hear. i actually had a couple more lines in the end but after some time decided to nix them.
you have chosen wisely.