Comments for the sieve and the sand

Comment on untitled by Julio Chapluzki

Julio Chapluzki — Tue, 07 Sep 2010 17:35:26 +0000

I loved the ending in particular.

Comment on Pedals by franky stein

franky stein — Tue, 07 Sep 2010 04:37:43 +0000

Love it. Espeacially the use of “crimsoned”. Just beautiful.

Comment on hide/w/e by franky stein

franky stein — Tue, 07 Sep 2010 04:35:22 +0000

Very talented.

Comment on untitled by franky stein

franky stein — Tue, 07 Sep 2010 04:33:34 +0000

Just dreamy. Great work. It captivated me.

Comment on Though I try. by franky stein

franky stein — Tue, 07 Sep 2010 04:31:11 +0000

I like it. Short but haunting in its way.

Comment on untitled by beighartman

beighartman — Mon, 06 Sep 2010 23:46:45 +0000

“lawless dark brown hair” Yes. Vivid. The whole thing’s good too.

Comment on hide/w/e by gregbrown

gregbrown — Sat, 04 Sep 2010 15:15:56 +0000

nice rhythm here.

Comment on i’d title this better if i didn’t have to race off to the pooper. by beighartman

beighartman — Tue, 31 Aug 2010 08:07:50 +0000

I think the whole ‘racing to the pooper’ and ‘running as fast as your legs will carry you’ overlap makes for a solid function. Unless, that is, you acquired dysentery and in which case, the ‘solid’ will be much more fluid – and, in fact, that may explain why you had to ‘race’ to the pooper as such bowel movements as those do not take ‘no,’ nor ‘wait’ for an answer.

Tangents: at your service.

Comment on Mr. Wolf. by prettybones

prettybones — Sat, 28 Aug 2010 22:00:04 +0000

I thought for sure he would be in a tie as well. but actually. he was in jeans and sneakers. his father wore a Hawaiian shirt and shorts…. take it as you will.

Comment on Boy emerges from the cellar holding a severed arm by Roger Mugs

Roger Mugs — Fri, 27 Aug 2010 05:03:26 +0000

this is a pretty fantastic short horror.

Comment on Boy emerges from the cellar holding a severed arm by Dhyan

Dhyan — Thu, 26 Aug 2010 21:45:15 +0000

i don’t know how appropriate is it – but i am smiling wide enough to catch two mosquitoes at once.

Comment on World Views Are Often Terrifying by tynedaile

tynedaile — Thu, 26 Aug 2010 07:10:48 +0000

i am totally just totally loving the use of ‘crawling’ here. crawling cars is a powerful thing

Comment on The Lost by rcribay

rcribay — Tue, 24 Aug 2010 23:46:05 +0000

i’ll fourth that.

Comment on World Views Are Often Terrifying by beighartman

beighartman — Tue, 24 Aug 2010 22:33:07 +0000

Hmmmm…

You’re right.

Comment on traffic by Roger Mugs

Roger Mugs — Tue, 24 Aug 2010 01:30:37 +0000

been there.
seen that.
agreed.

Comment on traffic by Roger Mugs

Roger Mugs — Tue, 24 Aug 2010 01:30:37 +0000

been there.
seen that.
agreed.

Comment on traffic by Dhyan

Dhyan — Mon, 23 Aug 2010 08:45:18 +0000

well, this couldn’t happen in Israel (nor in munich), most probably he would be knifed in Tel-Aviv

Comment on The Lost by David X. Hugo

David X. Hugo — Thu, 19 Aug 2010 14:52:23 +0000

Wow

Comment on The Lost by siubhan

siubhan — Thu, 19 Aug 2010 02:21:35 +0000

you paint such a vivid picture–incredible.

Comment on away by extrasimile

extrasimile — Thu, 19 Aug 2010 00:42:13 +0000

I’ve gotten in the habit of seeing who has posted a poem at the same time I have. I’ve just read Away. Pretty nice. It’s a lot different than what I’m doing, but it rather swings.
Hello from New York!