i could butcher songs better if i could remember the tune

July 18, 2010

some say love
is like a river
but they’re full of it
they’re all old
and stupid folks

the truth is love
is much more like a pond
or a puddle
filled with stagnant
moss
thriving on sun ripened
bacteria

the puddle will never
fade
but it wont be pretty either

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One Response to “i could butcher songs better if i could remember the tune”

  1. beighartman Says:

    Your metaphors could win an award. Spot. On.


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