some poor metaphor about swingsets or something

August 25, 2009

how i see the world as a playground
when i challenge to jump the highest
from the swing sets,
big kids size
and, though i never land it
my grace and style gives me 10’s
all around the sandbox
children holding up
their scorecards and oh
if i could change my middle name to
without relying on the mystical
friends that live in my mind when
i can find or afford them.
this is what i’m always working on.

One Response to “some poor metaphor about swingsets or something”

  1. beighartman Says:

    I would so much as say a “good” metaphor.

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