July 25, 2009

my condition shows itself not
lest the axis of the earth should be
slightly altered to the left

for then the

moon might shine through these
trees at night and illuminate
my once pale thoughts

3 Responses to “shmampire”

  1. beighartman Says:

    Other than stumbling over the title a few times, I really like this. And also, I think I finally nailed the pronunciation, so that’s good too.

  2. Roger Mugs Says:

    yea this felt like a struggle for a suitable title… but thanks on the poem eh.
    the poem ALWAYS comes before the title for me.
    though sometimes i use the variable length of the title to see what other poetry i can squeeze in

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