minute ripples in the sidewalk’s puddles from this week-long drizzle.
sidewalks ripple from this weeks long drizzle grounds atremble
i like the first two better than mine, but not the third. how about this:
sidewalks ripple from this week-long drizzle but the wind carries warmth
PRAISE (insert here)
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sidewalks ripple
from this weeks long drizzle
grounds atremble
i like the first two better than mine, but not the third. how about this:
sidewalks ripple
from this week-long drizzle
but the wind carries warmth
PRAISE (insert here)