when i first read this, I read “left window”
i liked the idea of a left window…
but window left is also a good way to end a line
my suggestion is, if you’re going to stick with more and more haiku, make an attempt to go for single line haiku titles. that is. 17 syllable titles, then the haiku itself… i’d be really impressed by a person who could do that consistently.
when i first read this, I read “left window”
i liked the idea of a left window…
but window left is also a good way to end a line
my suggestion is, if you’re going to stick with more and more haiku, make an attempt to go for single line haiku titles. that is. 17 syllable titles, then the haiku itself… i’d be really impressed by a person who could do that consistently.