indiscriminately edified against all odds
June 28, 2008
they set out to take on the
massive evil beast, grabbing hold of
tail
torso
back
neck
then the head
gasping for air
it blew forth fire
they searched for the fabled
weak spot between four
scales
but his strength outdid them all-
talons of six inches, eight inches, more
he grabbed them each and took to flight
flinging them against a mountain
but it was made of jello
this was their goal.


June 28, 2008 at 2:55 pm
I think your posts are getting betterandbetter. Thumbs up.
June 28, 2008 at 3:53 pm
why thank you.
although – (over the top boastful comment coming up) – it is hard to improve upon perfection…
June 28, 2008 at 3:53 pm
p.s. glad you’re coming back