19 jun 8

June 24, 2008

water from a hose

hot before cool and passed

brother to brother—

the break worthwhile

 

untainted by man

like bottled water will be

and much much purer—

for guzzles earned

 

when I-25

reached one end to the other

my house to Grandpa’s—

places for play

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3 Responses to “19 jun 8”

  1. Roger Mugs Says:

    this first stanza…. awesome

  2. Tucker Collins Says:

    haven’t heard anything from you for a while, what have you been doing, perfecting this poem?

  3. Poeta Maximus Says:

    ?!?!?!?!?TIM REALLY IS A SLACKER ISN’T HE?!?!?!?!


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