19 jun 8
June 24, 2008
water from a hose
hot before cool and passed
brother to brother—
the break worthwhile
untainted by man
like bottled water will be
and much much purer—
for guzzles earned
when I-25
reached one end to the other
my house to Grandpa’s—
places for play
beighartman
captainwinklestein
Julio Chapluzki
freakynewchild
ladydarnell
philip santos
rcribay
Roger Mugs
saxsquatch
David X. Hugo
tynedaile
June 25, 2008 at 6:22 am
this first stanza…. awesome
June 25, 2008 at 5:36 pm
haven’t heard anything from you for a while, what have you been doing, perfecting this poem?
November 10, 2008 at 8:56 pm
?!?!?!?!?TIM REALLY IS A SLACKER ISN’T HE?!?!?!?!