the sieve and the sand

8 Responses to “haiku”

1. mellowpinello says:

   June 19, 2008 at 7:43 pm

   wow!

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2. Roger Mugs says:

   June 20, 2008 at 6:22 am

   yeah! Wow!

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3. Tucker Collins says:

   June 20, 2008 at 7:00 am

   i love the poem, but what does
   “five two days” mean?

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4. deanjbaker says:

   June 20, 2008 at 8:01 am

   interesting to see – thanks

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5. Roger Mugs says:

   June 20, 2008 at 8:19 am

   five gun shots

   two days ago

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6. Roger Mugs says:

   June 20, 2008 at 8:20 am

   and a good postmodern:
   whatever you think it means

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7. joshuagrace says:

   June 20, 2008 at 8:46 am

   good one

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8. Tucker Collins says:

   June 21, 2008 at 6:58 am

   I’ll keep that on mind

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