i find enjoyment in
by Julio Chapluzki
small things, strange things,
things in which
my wife is always amazed.
like taping stargate
and watching it all day;
or the thought of sci-fi friday
not being too far away.
like new video games
to play on my wii;
and summer vacation
giving me leisure just to be.
like burt’s bees wax
and its surprising tingle;
or the Christmas season
and the coming of kris kringle.
like listening to indie music
and finding new bands;
or watching strange movies
that take place in distant lands.
like sitting at home
alone with my wife,
focusing only on the present
and not the rest of life.
good rhyme and nice kick at the end
i say good because normally i hate rhyme. but this i dont hate
I don’t like rhyme much either, but I think I don’t like it because it is hard to make sound good. Normally I think rhyme sounds kind of preschool and artificial, kind of like tingle and kringle, but what else rhymes besides shingle or fingle (I know fingle’s not a real word, but that’s my point)?
I just dont like when rhyme decides the words rather than the right word deciding.